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A.C. Cargill, All-Human Author's avatar

Ugh! Wading through several paragraphs to get to the meat of the email doesn't sound like a good way to attract readers.

Karen Cherry's avatar

Yes, A.C, that header is longer than mine, for sure.

The multi-paragraph header is a definite trend in Substack at the moment, one that some people can take inspiration from and some might choose not to follow. The fact that Substack's developers have accommodated such big headers is an indicator that they probably work quite for conversions.

I showcased Cosmographia's header because it has a lot of elements that you can pick and choose from, as a writer, to see which works best.

A.C. Cargill, All-Human Author's avatar

I didn't see anything useful. In fact, the length was such a turn off that I just went elsewhere. I don't want to have my readers doing the same. Not all advice works. In fact, a lot I've seen does NOT work.

Lordy Belance's avatar

Agreed! I don't want to write multiple paragraphs for my header. I want to write a few sentences.

Amy Jomantas's avatar

I understand that people might not want 4 paragraphs, but I do appreciate the example that gives me some ideas of ideas that I might cover more concisely. I appreciate this information.

Joyce Wycoff's avatar

M.E. does a great header and it is really important real estate ... thanks for writing about it.

Ed Paulson PhD - The BizDoctor's avatar

Really useful post Karen. I was just thinking about how I wanted to use headers! Psychic? The actual steps at the end is super useful. Thanks!

M. E. Rothwell's avatar

Thanks so much for using Cosmographia as an example! Took much trial and error to figure out what to include, but I think it’s in a good spot now. The hard part is balancing the information with brevity!

Rick Lewis's avatar

Thanks so much for reminding me about this. My headers have been blank for months, which is a missed opportunity.

Ali Isaac's avatar

Hi Karen, I'm probably misunderstanding here, but isn't the content of the header that you have described here pretty much the same as the in-post context that appears at the top of every post? And if so, which one works better?

Bijibilla Rama Rao's avatar

Excellent outputs! A very useful information. Thanks a lot !